tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3590701424246645406.post1398757632495605892..comments2012-11-23T08:16:14.523-08:00Comments on Into the Black: Titting & TattingIncy Blackhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11601008680166756610noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3590701424246645406.post-65074844400294026252012-11-23T08:16:14.523-08:002012-11-23T08:16:14.523-08:00Owww - nice snippet, Jane, fun, flirty but best of...Owww - nice snippet, Jane, fun, flirty but best of all, with enough characterisation to encourage me to make them my friends.<br /><br />Brave of you to post too - so thanks<br /><br />IncyIncy Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11601008680166756610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3590701424246645406.post-84737278498514554232012-11-23T08:13:05.842-08:002012-11-23T08:13:05.842-08:00Thanks Joanne - who would have thought such an inn...Thanks Joanne - who would have thought such an innocent word, 'look' could seize centre stage.Incy Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11601008680166756610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3590701424246645406.post-14509000293062554622012-11-23T08:11:34.552-08:002012-11-23T08:11:34.552-08:00My 'Thanks Giving' resolution - no more pu...My 'Thanks Giving' resolution - no more public posting of WIPs!Incy Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11601008680166756610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3590701424246645406.post-3532540577650420362012-11-22T13:09:07.333-08:002012-11-22T13:09:07.333-08:00Look out! Here's mine!
‘Sorry, I wasn’t expec...Look out! Here's mine! <br />‘Sorry, I wasn’t expecting you.’<br />Except she was, judging by her pristine pumps, and short dress. Large black and white spots. He stifled a grin. More jockey than race-horse, this one. She turned, and he gave one mental thumbs-up as he clocked a patch of exposed, perfectly tanned back, that made him want to whistle, and a large bow, that put him in mind of a present waiting to be opened.<br />‘Someone scrubs up well when they take their shorts off.’ He shot her a wink.<br />‘Ah, so wrong! I’d never go out without shorts.’ She winked back and flicked up her full skirt, to give a flash of the shorts below.<br />So that told him! Time to try another opening line.<br />‘Nice place you’ve got here.’<br />‘Great isn’t it? It isn’t mine, I told you before, I live here free, in return for horse exercising, and Grandma-sitting. Let’s me be....’ <br />He cut in.<br />‘Let me guess. Independent? Why does that not surprise me? Sounds like one good deal, though having met the horse in question, I’m not so sure. My shoulder’s still in recovery after being dragged here by him this morning.’ He looked round the large open space again, this time being careful to avoid the pole area. Every surface was covered. ‘I take it someone ransacked the place whilst you were away?’ <br /><br />Thanks for the tag Incy!<br /><br />Jane Linfoothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11220709863963939533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3590701424246645406.post-64637227976001920652012-11-22T10:05:29.045-08:002012-11-22T10:05:29.045-08:00Love this excerpt! I just love the tension here.
...Love this excerpt! I just love the tension here. <br /><br />Don't feel bad. I'm about the same place in my WIP, and I've found over 100 instances. lol Thanks for the tag!Joanne Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708364499624604625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3590701424246645406.post-61314138494128754492012-11-22T10:03:55.480-08:002012-11-22T10:03:55.480-08:00Incy...well done girl. Lotta spark...and that'...Incy...well done girl. Lotta spark...and that's just the extract. Glad others are going to feel our pain..... Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com